Maple we are so proud of all of you. Give yourselves a huge pat on the back. xx
Sentence Stacking Maple's Secret of Black Rock.
Erin lived near a big fishing town and longed to go out to sea on a boat with her mum. Everyone told her it was too dangerous because of the legend of Black Rock. One day, she sneaked out onto the boat without her mum noticing and it set off with her on board... As soon as the wind blew, the big scary fog grew. (Thk U RH) The fog was scary! The fog was getting scarier! The fog was the scariest fog she had ever seen in her life. (Thk U CB) It instantaneously worsened, Erin could not stand the fog, as she struggled to see through. (Thk U SW) The swirling fog thickened until Erin couldn't see anything (Thk U EM). The colossal rock loomed over the boat, they were very scared (Thk U AB). It was a sooty rock as black as metal chains which were locked to the centre of the Earth. (Thk U MP) "We're going to die! Is this the end?" thought Erin helplessly. (Thk U CB) The enormous waves kept crashing against the tiny fishing boat. The boat turned and swirled up and down the huge waves like being on a roller coaster! (Thk U EW) CRASH! SPLASH! Erin disappeared into the dark, dark freezing sea. "This is so, so scary!" she thought. (Thk U SW) "I'm about to drown!" she thought. (Thk U CB) The sharp waves were hitting the life threatening rock. (Thk U RH) Falling deeper, deeper and deeper she was falling into the extreme dark. She was petrified!! (Thk U RH)