Look how busy we have been...
After Feb half term World Book Day 2021
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W/c 8th Feb- Science, Poems, Giants and lots of wintery fun in the snow!
JC (year1) is getting to make a super scientist. Success for OS (year 1) with the ice marbles. How to defeat fire giants by CB
"Our Museums" - The Maple 2 boys decided on a project to make their own museum.
They took Mrs Oldfield & McIntosh on a virtual tour.
MP's was a natural history museum SW took us to a food museum We visited an art gallery with CB AB's museum was all about fossils
RBD had made a Minecraft museum HW treated us to a trip to a Pokémon museum
Sentence Stacking Maple's Secret of Black Rock.
Erin lived near a big fishing town and longed to go out to sea on a boat with her mum. Everyone told her it was too dangerous because of the legend of Black Rock. One day, she sneaked out onto the boat without her mum noticing and it set off with her on board...
As soon as the wind blew, the big scary fog grew. (Thk U RH) The fog was scary! The fog was getting scarier! The fog was the scariest fog she had ever seen in her life. (Thk U CB) It instantaneously worsened, Erin could not stand the fog, as she struggled to see through. (Thk U SW) The swirling fog thickened until Erin couldn't see anything (Thk U EM).
The colossal rock loomed over the boat, they were very scared (Thk U AB). It was a sooty rock as black as metal chains which were locked to the centre of the Earth. (Thk U MP) "We're going to die! Is this the end?" thought Erin helplessly. (Thk U CB)
The enormous waves kept crashing against the tiny fishing boat. The boat turned and swirled up and down the huge waves like being on a roller coaster! (Thk U EW) CRASH! SPLASH! Erin disappeared into the dark, dark freezing sea.
"This is so, so scary!" she thought. (Thk U SW) "I'm about to drown!" she thought. (Thk U CB)
The sharp waves were hitting the life threatening rock. (Thk U RH)
She uncontrollably crashed about in the sea but the sea took her down. Falling deeper, deeper and deeper. She was falling into the extreme dark. She was petrified! Just them she heard a distressing rumble – it was threatening and alarming. (Thk U RH) Harsh! Startling! Threatening! (Thk U SW)
Black rock yawned awake sharply. Erin jumped quickly (Thk U SW) Erin jerked back! His face looked smiley and friendly. She felt calm and safe. Erin saw a lime-green turtle, a ginger-orange starfish, a peach-orange clownfish and some honey-orange crabs. (Thk U CB)
Erin was captivated by the far reaching deep blue sea. She was amazed by the the beauty of the wonderful brightly coloured fish that swum around her. A party of parrot fish glided pass. This was paradise! (Thk U EW) Erin was so amazed she just kept staring at the troop of dogfish because they were so special to her eyes. Their ruby heads glittered in the moonlight, it was stunningly beautiful. (Thk U EB)
Jumping back in amazement, Erin noticed scrapes on the rocks from rusty old anchors, twisted fishing nets and shiny treasure. She caught sight of a clumsy crab clinging to the shells, a magnificent mudskipper munching on juicy mud and simmering seahorse swaying in the sea. An octopus and an eagle ray followed lazily behind. (Thk U SW) Slick as a squid pulsating in the ocean Black Rock’s hand rose out of the water.
“Thank you, my friend,” spluttered Erin.
She knew the black rock was unforgettable. (Thk U RH) Erin recognised that this was the most incredible moment of her life. (Thk U SW)
Erin relaxed while she gazed at the dark, blue, sploshing sea. The dangerous dog shark followed the flapping flying fish, followed by Black Rock joyously. Together they made it back to the shore because they had persevered. (Thk U RH) They had had an incredible time, they had learned of friendship. (Thk U SW)
Thank you for reading. Thank you to all the contributors.
THE END.
Check out EM reading her first two plot points here... drive.google.com/file/d/15JY0qZa-faSZd8SeLB7wwt65B2r8lq_C/view?usp=sharing
As soon as the wind blew, the big scary fog grew. (Thk U RH) The fog was scary! The fog was getting scarier! The fog was the scariest fog she had ever seen in her life. (Thk U CB) It instantaneously worsened, Erin could not stand the fog, as she struggled to see through. (Thk U SW) The swirling fog thickened until Erin couldn't see anything (Thk U EM).
The colossal rock loomed over the boat, they were very scared (Thk U AB). It was a sooty rock as black as metal chains which were locked to the centre of the Earth. (Thk U MP) "We're going to die! Is this the end?" thought Erin helplessly. (Thk U CB)
The enormous waves kept crashing against the tiny fishing boat. The boat turned and swirled up and down the huge waves like being on a roller coaster! (Thk U EW) CRASH! SPLASH! Erin disappeared into the dark, dark freezing sea.
"This is so, so scary!" she thought. (Thk U SW) "I'm about to drown!" she thought. (Thk U CB)
The sharp waves were hitting the life threatening rock. (Thk U RH)
She uncontrollably crashed about in the sea but the sea took her down. Falling deeper, deeper and deeper. She was falling into the extreme dark. She was petrified! Just them she heard a distressing rumble – it was threatening and alarming. (Thk U RH) Harsh! Startling! Threatening! (Thk U SW)
Black rock yawned awake sharply. Erin jumped quickly (Thk U SW) Erin jerked back! His face looked smiley and friendly. She felt calm and safe. Erin saw a lime-green turtle, a ginger-orange starfish, a peach-orange clownfish and some honey-orange crabs. (Thk U CB)
Erin was captivated by the far reaching deep blue sea. She was amazed by the the beauty of the wonderful brightly coloured fish that swum around her. A party of parrot fish glided pass. This was paradise! (Thk U EW) Erin was so amazed she just kept staring at the troop of dogfish because they were so special to her eyes. Their ruby heads glittered in the moonlight, it was stunningly beautiful. (Thk U EB)
Jumping back in amazement, Erin noticed scrapes on the rocks from rusty old anchors, twisted fishing nets and shiny treasure. She caught sight of a clumsy crab clinging to the shells, a magnificent mudskipper munching on juicy mud and simmering seahorse swaying in the sea. An octopus and an eagle ray followed lazily behind. (Thk U SW) Slick as a squid pulsating in the ocean Black Rock’s hand rose out of the water.
“Thank you, my friend,” spluttered Erin.
She knew the black rock was unforgettable. (Thk U RH) Erin recognised that this was the most incredible moment of her life. (Thk U SW)
Erin relaxed while she gazed at the dark, blue, sploshing sea. The dangerous dog shark followed the flapping flying fish, followed by Black Rock joyously. Together they made it back to the shore because they had persevered. (Thk U RH) They had had an incredible time, they had learned of friendship. (Thk U SW)
Thank you for reading. Thank you to all the contributors.
THE END.
Check out EM reading her first two plot points here... drive.google.com/file/d/15JY0qZa-faSZd8SeLB7wwt65B2r8lq_C/view?usp=sharing
W/c 02.02.2021 Maple have begun the week in London! (As well as dealing with Fire Giants!)
W/c 27.01.21, Science investigation. Which material will slow you down best on a slide
OS (yr1) predicted correctly, the bread was the slowest because it was rough. Foxy helped RH & IH!
Thank you FORS for our great new reading scheme books.
WE LOVE THEM!
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